 AgentMGD
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Date: October 22, 2005 @ 2:31 PM
 bravo 
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 BOWILLIE
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Date: October 22, 2005 @ 4:45 PM
knockin on heavens door!
very cool!!
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chrismacmanus
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Date: October 22, 2005 @ 6:16 PM
Not bad  The rhythm guitar needs to be worked on though, there's big issues with the timing and possibly tuning - but that can be easily sorted.
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 tsand19151
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Date: October 22, 2005 @ 10:18 PM
yes, not bad at all... sounds like a strat... nice separation in the mix. have to agree with Chris about the timing, but it's a small issue and not a big one to me. kool lead work thru-out. keep up the playing.. you got a nice future with the guitar. Keep playing 
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 Traf
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Date: October 23, 2005 @ 10:57 AM
I agree with what the others have said and would just like to add that there's some nice ideas here...
The major scale is a not that easy sometimes to run around, but you'recreating some nice phrases.. I think once you get a few more techniques under your belt, it will all satrt to fall in place...
There's a little bit around the 1.14 mark that has a nice loose feel to it... It will be really interesting to hear you developing...
You sound like you're really enjoyig yourself, which is what matters most at this stage of your playing..
Yeah, great to hear.. 
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GeneHilbert
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Date: October 23, 2005 @ 11:35 AM
I concur......
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 spencm
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Date: October 23, 2005 @ 12:59 PM
Fresh sound very clear recording keep up the good work
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edogg
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Date: October 26, 2005 @ 7:50 PM
Really liked it. Was very laid back.
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jayceslayn
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Date: October 27, 2005 @ 9:53 AM
I like it, just very relaxed and all that. Alway one of my favorite things to do than just play is to just make up something new with some scales. Good work and keep it up.
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ClashCityRoc...
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 9:58 AM
hey,
first off nice work with recording quality, dead clear.
the rhythm guitar sounds good, but maybe more variety might be good - but then again the focus is pretty much entirely on the lead guitar.
which is really good, you got some good phrases going on there, melodic and nice to listen to. Keep practising and it can only get better!
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 TheElf
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 10:21 AM
very nice guitar, good job 
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KyleEpps
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 5:17 PM
Thanks for the comment on my instrumetnal. I really love the laid back improv you have goin on in this song. Keep it up. Oh, please listen to my new one too. Good job on this song though!
-Kyle
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celtaidd
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 7:37 PM
Early Fleetwood Mac (the best years) Nice, needs lyrics, maybe, but otherwise I LOVE IT
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novskyline
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Date: October 31, 2005 @ 10:28 AM
nice lead work. like mentioned above, i'd suggest working on the timing and make sure anytime you record, check the tuning to see if its dead on. keep it up!
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imemine
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 10:31 AM
Nice. Some tasty chops at times indeed. The opening phrases remind me slightly of Jerry Garcia. I think Traf about summed it up for me. A backbeat, bass etc---perhaps voices, this will make a great tune. 
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ChaosSurfer
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 11:13 AM
Cool improv, very laid back and relaxed.
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 11:09 PM
Yea Skynard covering Dylan [All Along the Watchtower]  I like your style of lead dude. Kind'a old school ;nod:
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 11:12 PM
 
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 brokensmile124
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Date: November 2, 2005 @ 5:38 PM
Awesome. Quite relaxing.
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rico
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Date: November 2, 2005 @ 6:06 PM
love the background guitar work, as well as the lead.
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litesenseative
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Date: November 3, 2005 @ 3:19 AM
really loved it so chilled out. Nice lead and and rythme.
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 ShadowMom
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Date: November 3, 2005 @ 9:46 AM
That's really good! I look forward to more! And welcome to DMusic!
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Rodrica
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Date: November 3, 2005 @ 6:13 PM
The others have made some very constructive points Great to hear someone who puts such life and expression into their playing. Look forward to hearing more
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IommiGOD
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Date: November 3, 2005 @ 6:46 PM
Love it thats really good!!!!!
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Ghostie
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Date: November 3, 2005 @ 8:09 PM
Passion and a guitar goes so well together 
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shutyatrap
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 3:26 AM
This Sounds really great. Some very good playing here. I like the mix of guitars on this track.
Steve
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AbortiveMind
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 9:49 AM
Very smooth playing Nice jam, chill and relax. I have to agree about the timing, but I know sometimes it's hard with the multi-tracking  Great sound Nice job on mixing the guitars
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southwing
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 10:06 AM
Enjoyed your jam here. I like the way you panned the guitars. Gave me a chance to really hear your pickin. You have talent. Cool Track!
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TameasDust
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 11:06 AM
Very nice ... nice production and separation ... purity ... very well done
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imnothere
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Date: November 5, 2005 @ 1:04 PM
Very cool!!
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Apoctic
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Date: November 7, 2005 @ 2:35 PM
Beautiful guitar work.
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 skynyrddude
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Date: November 8, 2005 @ 9:31 PM
i likey
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 BaBiKoLeAn
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Date: November 8, 2005 @ 10:54 PM
whoa, if only i could play a guitar like you... haha. really incredible work!
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ZsigE
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Date: November 9, 2005 @ 12:00 PM
Well, everyone else has already said it, but I will too - very nice lead work, good and clean and a lovely tone. The rhythm part's good as well, I don't think I heard any major mistakes at all. The one thing that could have improved it would be blending the two parts better - it felt a bit as though there were two songs here competing to be heard rather than one coherent bit of music, although that did get btter as the piece went on. Good work all round, though - hope to hear more from you!
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dsindel
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Date: November 9, 2005 @ 8:27 PM
sounds like a lot of fun, I agree with the majority of what has already been said...
In summary the rhythm part could be a bit more on the beat and perhaps playing to a click track or having a metronome sitting off to the side would certainly help you along...
Keep going..
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GTOriginal
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Date: November 11, 2005 @ 11:44 PM
I can tell you dig what you are doing, any song can be nitpicked to death, I choose to just enjoy it. A click/metronome would help for sure, but tell ya what, as Ghostie said, the passion's there. That's the art of it, the rest is science really. I am of the opinion that anyone can be a scientist but not everyone can be an artist, if that makes any sense. It's kinda late lol. 
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GTOriginal
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Date: November 11, 2005 @ 11:47 PM
Hehe plus, it's called "Coffe House Jam" so maybe give you a break on the timing too! Last time I jammed a coffe house I wore an MP3 player with a click track in it (my own timing really sux) and some guy in the audience said "Hey dude, what's with the ear buds?" My answer was "Van Halen, 1984. I get kinda bored sometimes". Thanx for posting, a pleasure.
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notserp
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Date: November 12, 2005 @ 9:41 AM
My son is big time Bob Dylan fan and we like to jam on this tune together. It's usually the first song we do when we get together to jam
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Vickxxx
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Date: November 12, 2005 @ 12:28 PM
Sounds like you're having some fun with this! You have some good ideas flowing thru your leads. The recording of both guitars is crystal clear.
Keep it up
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thought-fox
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Date: November 13, 2005 @ 8:24 PM
 
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strum
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Date: November 14, 2005 @ 11:06 PM
really nice intro...
nice and smooth track,i personally dont like the extreme panning, but yea, thats just me
really sounds like fun
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daniel1988
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Date: November 17, 2005 @ 8:41 PM
i luv it
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takeitt
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Date: November 17, 2005 @ 8:45 PM
Very nice sounding, I like your use of panning.
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PIS
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Date: November 18, 2005 @ 6:59 PM
man, i was listening to that, n have had it play through about 6 times now, going on 7th, just relaxes, i could just imagine a tear coming to my eye if i could play the guitar and was playing like u on this track, feel the emotion going into every note. cool
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Ghostie
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Date: November 19, 2005 @ 10:21 AM
Back for another listen
This is so good!!!
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Notary04
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Date: November 19, 2005 @ 4:36 PM
This is so cheerful, like the late afternoon sun on a crowded beach. I like you're style of playing, it's more like an enthusiastic conversation than a song.
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pangtera
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Date: November 20, 2005 @ 2:34 AM
This demo has a quality about it that brings back general nostalgia. Very emotional melodies!
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Bhairava
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Date: November 20, 2005 @ 10:15 AM
Its not bad. With the lead stuff I'd say for the style of song you'd be better keeping it melodic lead playing for the most part slow but phrased well and maybe get faster later. It always sounds better if you keep to your inside your limits with lead too. You need to try and take the lead somewhere like playing a melody line followed by a counter melody or something like that. Nice though.
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farfor44
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Date: November 20, 2005 @ 11:41 AM
Its hard to believe you're not even a teenager yet Look out all guitarists theres a new kid on the block and hes on the journey to being a great guitarist
I like this Cole..You have a bright future ahead of youkeep up the good work!!
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coax
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 10:04 AM
This is sweet.
Nice job.
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FraDonaghy
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 3:44 PM
The best of your three in my opinion.
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Chilly876
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 11:34 AM
i love this song, knockin on heaven's door right? this is really really cool on the electric guitar like you did it
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NadaVanNie
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 1:14 PM
Not bad...
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billrhynes
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 10:40 PM
cool...reminds me of some of my ol multitrack stuff...always like a rich chorus sound like that.
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INoxx
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Date: November 27, 2005 @ 11:06 AM
classing and efficient progression, Dylan would be proud ...in few more years u'll be the man
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Apertome
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 8:51 PM
Fantastic mood you've created here. I'd definitely like to hear you do some more fleshed-out pieces.
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hantu
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Date: December 3, 2005 @ 12:36 PM
okay this is my favourate from you... love the whole feel of this.... man i can't believe you play this good... amazing
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perkie1973
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Date: December 10, 2005 @ 3:36 PM
nice Jam.....
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RayN44
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Date: December 15, 2005 @ 7:16 PM
Yea man Nice work here, but i really dont see you as a rythm guitar player. You do better playing with the leads
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soundview
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Date: January 6, 2006 @ 12:51 AM
I really liked the effect on your rythm guitar. Give the lead a 7.5/10. But I am listening to it right now and it is consistantly improving throughout. yeah change that to an 8.5/10. Good Job
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jsmitchell
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Date: January 29, 2006 @ 12:22 AM
killer leads bro
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SaladDays
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Date: February 14, 2006 @ 1:32 AM
you are gnarls for a little kid, how old are you anyway you look young, well props.
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davinalise
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Date: March 1, 2006 @ 7:04 PM
niiiiiice!!!
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dennytate
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Date: March 4, 2006 @ 3:42 PM
This song is incredible ! I love the melody, the guitar work is impressive.
You've got the gift of song writing, that's for certain. Great Job !
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Music-Rules
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Date: June 30, 2006 @ 7:27 AM
Niceeee.
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vzeye
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Date: August 23, 2006 @ 9:16 PM
  You must leave them in awe in that coffee house. I bet they say, "Gotta learn the guitar, want to play like that."
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