 AgentMGD
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Date: October 22, 2005 @ 2:09 PM
a very good jam  - cannot wait to hear more from you
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 tsand19151
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Date: October 22, 2005 @ 10:25 PM
would love to hear this with drums and bass, invest in a cheap drum machine and you won't be sorry. It will help to develop your timing as well. that being said, diggin your solo work. nice crunch axe on the rhythm. It's gonna be fun watching you grow as a guitarist. Please post more as you learn new stuff. nice job 
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 Traf
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Date: October 23, 2005 @ 11:00 AM
What Tim says is a great idea..
Nice tone on the guitars and again, you have some good ideas..
Well done.. 
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 GeneHilbert
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Date: October 23, 2005 @ 11:41 AM
Some interesting ideas....... keep doing what you are doing, playing, recording. Keep working your scales - all of them. Practice truly does make perfect.
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ClashCityRoc...
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 10:01 AM
nice rhythm playing, that riff is dead cool.
the chords sound a tad messy what with all the distortion.
Some interesting lead work going on - could maybe do with being lifted slightly in the mix...
you got some skill though mate - I would like to hear some 'proper' pieces by you.
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KyleEpps
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 6:28 PM
Nice job man! That riff is killer and I love the lead especially around 1:15 or so. You have great technique too on the lead, it sounds a bit bluesy and mixed with the hard rock sounding riff it blends in nice. Good job.
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jayceslayn
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Date: October 30, 2005 @ 10:45 AM
I like this jam too, man. I think it would definetly deserve to have some back up in the drums and bass department on it, but other from that it's got some pretty nice bits inside it already. Keep up the good work!
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 novskyline
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Date: October 31, 2005 @ 10:30 AM
you got the mind and ear for lead guitar and developing some interesting riffs, like in this song! again, my biggest advice to you is tighten up on the timing and tuning. maybe experiment with distortion tones. sounds a little scratchy and muddy.
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imemine
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 10:33 AM
Yea man. Get a drum machine. If your recording with software there are some free programs out there that do an acceptable job of drumming. Some great ideas in here for sure. Nice!
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victorsskull
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 10:09 PM
kinda funky 
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 11:18 PM
I like your approach this lead sounds a little Hendrix-ish It's a nice riff needs the other guys in the band
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rico
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Date: November 2, 2005 @ 6:07 PM
dude seriously find a drummer. And once you got one, you'll have some very good work.
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BOWILLIE
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Date: November 2, 2005 @ 10:43 PM
ozzie would dig this!
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 ShadowMom
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Date: November 3, 2005 @ 9:50 AM
There's a lot of talent here...just keep workin' it. And listen to those people up there--they know what they're talking about! 
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Rodrica
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Date: November 3, 2005 @ 6:18 PM
I hear elements of Hendrix I would agree with playing along with a drumtrack...it helps with phrasing and timing a lot. A few years down the line and you will be a great lead guitarist
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shutyatrap
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 3:30 AM
Your guitar playing shows a lot of passion and technique. Makes me wish I could rise above more than 4 chord (well 4 when it takes my fancy)Indie rambles that I myself do.
Regards,
Steve
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AbortiveMind
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 9:53 AM
Very nice jam and hell yeah, it's heavy As Tim said: you should think about putting some drums and stuff on it, that'll sound very very cool  You're doing great on your guitar  Nice technique and playing!
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TameasDust
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 11:10 AM
very nice ... distinct and pure ...
give a listen to this guy
http://glynjedwards.dmusic.com/ I specially like his james bond cover
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 skynyrddude
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Date: November 8, 2005 @ 10:25 PM
i like this one better hehe
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ZsigE
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Date: November 9, 2005 @ 12:04 PM
Same comment as for the first song on here - excellent playing on both parts, just could do with the parts working together more. You've got some great musical ideas in the lead part particularly, and you're doing an excellent job keeping the tone that clean. Bit of development and this'll be extremely good.
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GTOriginal
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Date: November 11, 2005 @ 11:53 PM
You can do this. You can do that. You can do another thing. Know what I'm gonna do? Enjoy the track, you are good with that lead axe. Listen to all those people who know what they are talking about, then make up your own mind and go with your heart. Technical development can always be added to any music, none of us are perfect, and if we were, we'd suck. You have serious soul and drive here though, and that is a more rare commodity.
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songbird
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Date: November 12, 2005 @ 3:46 PM
Rock on corn boy 
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TegidC
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Date: November 13, 2005 @ 8:48 AM
I liked it, really inventive lead. The Panning was a little too heavy, and it could've really been two seperate songs. Both very good seperately, just link it somehow. Good stuff.
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strum
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Date: November 14, 2005 @ 11:09 PM
HOHOHO! love the moment the lead came in... that was really quite some entry
the rythm guitar's actually playing quite a good riff, which gets sidetracked, later on, but yea... i like it
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 PIS
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Date: November 18, 2005 @ 7:03 PM
yeah the lead really kicks behind! i turned the right channel down a touch and wham...they melted together, sounded nice...
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Notary04
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Date: November 19, 2005 @ 4:42 PM
Definitely heavy coolness going on here. Old leather, bug eye shades, rumbling harley, long stretch of country road, I think you get the picture!  Very cool stuff. Having read some of the other comments before listening, I was cringing in anticipation of an offbeat performance, but as far as I'm concerned, your timing's spot on. I'd like to hear some keys and some kinda horn, and yes, drums in here. You'd have a helluva jamming ensemble.
Anyway, my dreams aside, this is a fun little number. Nice work!
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CarvinAbuser
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Date: November 21, 2005 @ 11:07 AM
Great riff, interesting lead. Tone reminds me of a Marshall amp that I used to have. Great track!
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fored
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 8:23 AM
This is really catchy. Nice!  Great riff you got there too, plus cool riffs.  Great job on this!
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farfor44
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Date: November 23, 2005 @ 6:48 PM
Yea I like the groove you got going hereI can really hear drums with this one that would kick the drive up a notchThis stands tall the way it isbut for a more full sound consider bass,and drumbsYour timing is great BTW..
Nice track
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FraDonaghy
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 3:43 PM
Reminds me of my old band days. Nice work.
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Britmick
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Date: November 25, 2005 @ 10:29 AM
Ya gotta get them drums on it matey 
Even a little bass maybe. :thinks:
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Apertome
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 8:49 PM
Sweet jam! Loving the guitar tone. I agree you need drums and some of the rhythm is off, but I'm very impressed. You've got some great riffs and great moments in the solo here, keep up the good work.
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Mojosnake
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Date: January 6, 2006 @ 6:34 AM
by far your best roo
loved the tone and the lead is great
you got it man
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mystery-machine
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Date: February 7, 2006 @ 4:12 PM
Rockin Roo! I like the rhythm progression you came up with and the leads are PDcool!
WTG!
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Mentalfunk
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Date: March 2, 2006 @ 3:40 AM
yeh, drums be awesome kiddo!! Honestly, considering yer age, you got it....most people here don't lol....you do.
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dennytate
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Date: March 4, 2006 @ 3:55 PM
You sound like a pro , how old are you ?
This is really really good !
Yes you really got it, this is like
a firecracker 
How do you do this ?
So far this is my fave, i love this.
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Stercesderised
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Date: March 8, 2006 @ 10:05 AM
love the ditty jam little bro; friggin great job! while I agree with everyone that you need a rhythm section, I feel where you are going with this just fine. nice track!
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MikeLirette
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Date: April 4, 2006 @ 6:15 AM
critiquing as I go I like when the lead comes in very nice
So far it all sounds really great quality.
And it just ended. Haha what do you use to record? That's awesome stuff..
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KennyH
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Date: April 28, 2006 @ 7:22 PM
Really really cool man, I love the mix of the heavy riff and the clean bluesy lead.
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billrhynes
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Date: April 29, 2006 @ 12:35 PM
man, cool riff...this is what I used to do...two tracks, didn't have no drum machine...couldn't afford 'em back then  your leads have a lot of tone and feeling...It's very cool watching it come together in your playing
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Orion
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Date: June 6, 2006 @ 9:50 PM
cool riff.nice  the lead sounds great!!
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